Wednesday, March 6, 2013
‘Going Rogue’ Again? Keeping Client Communications In Check
Thursday, March 15, 2012
Why 'Good' Press Releases = 'Bad' Journalism
The following article by Vanessa Horwell, Chief Visibility Officer of ThinkInk, originally appeared on Marketing Daily on 3/15/12.
When writing news stories, editors advise young reporters to do the following: stick to facts, don’t opine, place important/newest information high, answer the five Ws, have a solid lead and conclusion, spell names correctly, use conversational language, meet deadlines and hit the word count.
It’s a formula for success that reporters of all ages rely on. More than that, however, the tips speak to the professional evolution of storytelling found to be most effective at getting points across, with a 150+year history.
Seems like a simple formula, right?
Then why do so many press releases I read -- and some I am required to write -- fail to meet these standards? What’s changed in the communications industry that allows for the writing and distribution of such abysmal drivel? And why don’t the rules governing quality storytelling apply to many of today’s releases?
PR is NOT the Dark Side of Journalism - But Some Clients Might Work for the Death Star

Whoa. Three questions in one paragraph -- and a possible clichéd Star Wars reference subhead. That, too, may violate a writing essential -- that a story can be about one thing and should avoid clichés like the plague (cliché intended). Coming from a public relations angle, I can tell you that it’s not as simple as pitting agenda-pushing poor-writing PR professionals against reporters.
Too often the challenge lies with our clients and their expectations. Yes, as their communications team, it’s our job to direct conversation, to craft proper messages and distribute that message through the media in a concise, accurate and compelling manner. But like journalists, we too can’t always claim the moral high road. Clients pay our salaries, just as advertisers pay (or used to pay) journalists. Sometimes we just have to do what we’re told. Most times, we just have to “make it work.”
Press Release Dos and Don’ts
Of course, “making copy work” is not like making copy sing -- a nod to the lyrical and rhythmic flow of quality writing. An off pitch release (Not the PR pitch) “creates” news rather than telling something newsworthy. Ask yourself -- if you didn’t work for company X, would you read it? If the answer is ‘no,’ then you’re already in trouble. The solution: clients need to be honest about their announcements. Writing a release about something that may happen in six months is not newsworthy. That’s about as useful as someone planning to be rich by summer.
At most, that’s the kind of company “news” that meets Twitter post standards or a short email blast to client investors. It does not require an 800-word release that causes journalists’ eyeballs to glaze over or public relations professionals to struggle through 17 drafts of a document that has failed to capture the “essence of the company story.” Sometimes what clients say just isn’t that important. Clients need to have the humility and presence of mind to know when to shut up -- or at least respect when their PR staff tells them to.
Press releases also fail because of their language. If you’re writing a release in English, then write in English -- not gibberish. Is some jargon necessary? Yes. But too much and a press release can bury its own newsworthiness.
Print This: PR Professionals and Journalists Play the Same Game on Different Teams
How’s that for a newsworthy press release? But even if we play on different teams -- journalists dig for the news while PR professionals push what they’d like to be considered news -- the rules of the writing game should not change.
Modern journalistic writing evolved from the rigors of changing technology – the telegraph. At a penny a character, brevity was far more important than expressive prose. Combined with the fear of technology failure, reporters were taught to write and report news as if readers only read the headlines and first paragraph. (Sound familiar?)
Today’s hyperactive news cycle and extreme mobile connectivity is the outgrowth of these technological realities. PR professionals, emerging some 50 years after Samuel Morse’s invention, really do know what good writing and storytelling is about.
If only we can teach clients that same lesson, perhaps the PR vs. journalism professional stalemate will be broken –- and great press releases will equal great journalism.
The following article by Vanessa Horwell, Chief Visibility Officer of ThinkInk, originally appeared on Marketing Daily on 3/15/12.
Friday, March 18, 2011
'It's Not Me, It's You. You're Fired' from MediaPost

When you're a small agency just starting out, you need every client you can get. Scratch that -- almost every client you can get.
There are those clients that you can eliminate right from the start: they need everything yesterday, on spec for now, but the payoff is guaranteed once their [insert whatever next-best thing here] takes off. If you get those demands before you start, run for the hills, folks.
But back to my point. There comes a time when you can afford -- monetarily and mentally -- to break up with your client. Your agency has grown and your client roster is no longer dictated by cash flow, or the lack thereof. There are many reasons to call it quits, but I have never given marching orders to a client for one single reason. It's always been a multitude of factors that have built up over time until the point of no return.
Breaking up is never easy to do, in any type of relationship. This column was spurred by a recent experience within my agency, and I wanted to share a few reasons why you should consider breaking up with a client if the relationship isn't what you had hoped for.
Reason #4: "Mind your copy for a shilling, sir?"
In this business, it pays to be frugal, but you also get what you pay for. Some clients refuse to give in to the fact that we don't live within the pages of a Dickens novel. If you've proven your worth over the years to your client, and they still complain about rates, insist on markdowns, and belabor your honest billing, send them packing. It's time for them to find out if there really is an agency out there that can service all of their needs for what they expect to pay, which is very little.
Reason #3: "I'm just not that into you."
Face up to it: it's a bad strategic fit. Years ago, they loved your pitch, your vision, your ideas. None of it has come to fruition. Time and time again, you have attempted to steer them toward that vision, only to find that the client is simply looking for a Band-Aid for their current problem(s). Symptoms of bad strategic fit include: a client who exhibits indecisiveness, anxiety, little strategic insight; an agency that repeatedly finds itself fighting for consistency, flailing through endless days of fire-drill work.
Reason #2: "I'll Huff and I'll Puff"
Your client is a bully. Granted, both of you can have a disagreement over strategic direction and tactics, but a constant reminder that it's "my way or the highway" always results in a poor working relationship. Such an attitude by the client stifles creativity and limits your agency's effectiveness: you're relegated to being an order-taker. In such a case, there is usually no collaboration and the agency ends up hurting its reputation (after all, it's not your work anymore -- just the client's order). Precedence is key here: if you start out simply following direct orders and never assert your direction, you'll have a hard time turning the tide forever after.
Reason #1: "I Need it This Way ...
Regardless of how many times you've discussed the direction, and never mind the plans, if a client constantly disregards what you have to offer, cut them loose. "I need it this way" is yet another way of cutting you out of the picture. It does the brand no good, and you've placed your talent, marketing skills, and your reputation in the hands of your client.
You're Fired. Really.
Think about how many fires you put out daily. Do you constantly have to turn out hasty projects on a moment's notice, without proper planning or thought? Does your output have any consistency, or is your body of work for this client a panic-based mishmash?
So why prolong the pain any longer? Tell them to get lost (nicely, of course).
There are, of course, traits from every one of these reasons in almost every client, but if you have one client (hopefully, just one) that fits all of these reasons -- or even three out of four -- it's probably time to give them their walking papers.
As with matters of the heart, breaking up with a client can be painful. It hurts to cut loose a routine that's become second-nature -- even when it's not good for you. But if you can't tell a client "You're fired," and don't want to hurt their feelings, you can simply tell them: "You're just not ready for a relationship right now."
Have you had a nightmare client that you've had to fire? What did it take to get to that point?
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